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本帖最後由 大偉 於 2021-5-22 23:59 編輯
沉水香消人悄悄 (給陳彥霖)
改编自李清照的木蘭花令
沉水香消人悄悄 樓上朝來涼料雨
中仄中平平仄仄 中仄中平平仄仄
秋生維港水微波 雲滿南山風未掃
中平中仄仄平平 中仄中平平仄仄
淚烟莫訴連登客 捲下夕陽留晚照
中平中仄平平仄 中仄中平平仄仄
為君欲去更憑欄 人意不如山色好
中平中仄仄平平 中仄中平平仄仄
Sink Into water with fragrance nobody (to Chan yin lam)
edited from Magnolia Order of Li qing zhao
Sink into water with fragrance nobody
villa's morning cool expecting a rain
Fall alive in harbour with rippling water
clouds fill southern hills wind not yet wipe
Caught in tear gas don't complain to Lihkg guests
roll down the evening sun to leave a late look
For you wish to go and stand by the balustrade
our wishes are no better than the clear scene of hills.
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