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[評論] 歌詞選評 - Tell Laura I Love Her ( Ray Peterson )

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魏鵬展 熟練筆手 2009-6-2 21:31:20 灘主

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歌詞選評 - Tell Laura I Love Her ( Ray Peterson )

Laura and Tommy were lovers
He wanted to give her everything
Flowers, presents,
But most of all, a wedding ring
He saw a sign for a stock car race
A thousand dollar prize it read
He couldn't get Laura on the phone
So to her mother, Tommy said
Tell Laura I love her
Tell Laura I need her
Tell Laura I may be late
I've something to do, that cannot wait
He drove his car to the racing grounds
He was the youngest driver there
The crowed roared as they started the race
Around the track they drove at a deadly pace
No one knows what happened that day
Or how his car overturned in flames
But as they pulled him from the twisted wreck
With his dying breath, they heard him say
Tell Laura I love her
Tell Laura I need her
Tell Laura not to cry
My love for her will never die
Now in the chapel where Laura prays
For her poor Tommy, who passed away
It was just for Laura he lived and died
Alone in the chapel she can hear him cry
Tell Laura I love her
Tell Laura I need her
Tell Laura not to cry
My love for her will never die
Tell Laura I love her
Tell Laura I need her
Tell Laura not to cry
My love for her will never die

魏鵬展評:這是少有的敘事式歌詞,主題是表達男主角對女朋友無限量的愛。作者的寫作技巧主要透過男主角正面的性格,又安排一個悲慘的結局,這可引起讀者同情;而且臨死前,他還要處處為女友著想,更是引人下淚,又把這些內容反覆幾次,有一唱三歎,深化主題的作用。這種寫主人翁善良性格,又寫他悲慘的結局,是常見的戲劇手法。





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